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An email

作者: lorainve   发表日期: 2007-02-25 19:21  点击数: 326


一篇英语作业，大家提提建议

Dear friend:

Hello ! I hope all is going well with you. I want to go shopping with some friends. Do you want to join us . If your answer is yes, then please read this planning.

*We are going ride to get going at 8:30 . Then we will wait for you in front of the marketplace at 9:00.

*Don’t forget tell your parents don’t worry us.

*We  are  going to listen to the music in the music store and buy some reference book.

* We will have fun outside all day.

Do you expect that day ?  Hope to see you soon!

Sincerely yours,

Wang juan

 

 

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weiweizuiguai 发表于 2007-02-25 20:18
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We going to listen the music in the music store and buy some reference book.感觉这句话有错误样！we going should be we'er going．或者用现在时态go和后面buy 一致了！
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julieqin 发表于 2007-03-02 16:44
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*Don’t forget tell your parents don’t worry us. 应该为 Don't forget to tell your parents not to worry
about us.
*We are going ride to get going at 8:30 这句话看不明白
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